Kai Howe 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 (edited) Full name:Kai Howe Nickname:The Hawke Age:20 Gender:Male Race:1st Generation Coordinator Occupation: PIlot Birthplace:ORB Citizenship:ORB Personality:Usually a calm and collected young man but often in times he can be a bit nasty, a deadly warrior in his mind but at heart he is a kind and gentle person. When prompted he is an incredible fighter, but after a two year leave of absence he may be a bit rusty. Naturally smart and socially inept, he has a difficult time fitting in to most places like malls or other areas where social contact is inevitable. Appearance Height:six feet on the dot Weight: 156 lbs Hair Colour and Style:Kai was born with black hair but when he turned eighteen he died it blood red. He has a relatively short cut hair style. Eye Colour: Steel Grey Identifying Marks: Strange marking seemingly burnt into the flesh on his right arm that resembles a phoenix trapped in a circle surrounded by three small whispy balls of flame, to this day he is still unaware as to why he has it. Skin Tone:slightly tanned Build:chiselled but not bulky(about medium build) Clothing: usually in uniform but has taken a liking to casual dress such as an open suit jacket with a white t-shirt and black pants, (if you look inside his wardrobe this is almost all you'll see) Handiness: Right handed Background Mother:Kai's mother Sylmeria Howe, was an engineer in ORBs mass driver facility and died when Kai was only 10 years old from a mysterious incident at the facility. Father: His father was an officer in the defence forces at the time and was known as Antoine "Hammerman" Howe, due to his sometimes destructive personality, he was killed in the previous war defending ORb. Siblings:Amanda Howe was a calm young girl but disappeared at an early age, she is still missing to this day and Kai continues his seach for her. Wife/Girlfriend:None Personal History:Kai was born and raised in ORB around a number of different people, his mother, an engineer for the Mass driver facility and all her co-workers, and his father, and all the other soldiers in the Defence Forces. He lived a pretty sheltered life until his mother was killed in an incident concerning the mass driver when he was ten years old. It was at that time that he was shown everything his father had hidden from him for those 10 long years. As his life progressed and time trudged slowly on his training intensified by the day, hoping that one one day he will be able to find his sister and honour his mothers wishes for him to be a soldier like his father. It was not long after that, that his father was killed in combat when Kai was away studying at a dojo in Japan. When he heard the news he returned home only to see that he had no home left, so he reeturned to his master at the dojo and continued his training with a heavy heart but a mind that was bent on vengeance. When he turned eighteen due to his many personal reasons, as well as to avenge his fathers death, he became a pilot and fought in the ZAFT military for about two years before slipping into an early "retirement" (he disappeared) at the age of 20. To this day you can find him at his home on a small island off the florida coast line, where he has just begun to consider returning to a military career. Edited October 30, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liubei013 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 I sincerely hope this is still a WIP. (Work in Progress) To put it simply, you do not have anything about your character's personality and your background needs a lot more elaboration. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 You should look around at other profiles if you are not sure of the standard we aim for Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 3-4 nice sized paragraphs is the minimum in my eyes, but be sure to explain the critical points of your character in those paragraphs; things like why he joined the military etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wilhelm 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Also if possible, please use the template Valiant provided in the sticky at the top. Also, loooking at some of the profiles approved already will give you some insight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kai Howe 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Author Share Posted October 27, 2006 You're hopes are somewhat correct, i had to post it early because i didn't have anywhere to save it on my computer(piece of junk) so i will edit it if i haven't by the time you see this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mal Fain 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Just something I noticed, retirement at twenty seems unlikely ecspecially after joining at eighteen. For most modern military (real world) positions there tends to be a minimum length of service because of the amount of money it costs to train somebody. They want their moneys worth Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 (edited) At least seven years of enlistment or more I think :S Btw: marking glows red on occasion and is usually painful...to this day Kai does notunderstand it's purpose. I would say no; unless its a mechanical thing then there's no possible way (to my knowledge) that it can glow, cause pain and have a purpose. To me it sounds like a way to put fantasy into a Mecha rpg. Edited October 27, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 I'll have to agree with wind on that one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kai Howe 0 Posted October 30, 2006 Author Share Posted October 30, 2006 gee it's just the sun Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kai Howe 0 Posted October 30, 2006 Author Share Posted October 30, 2006 There we go, if anything else needs changing just let me know, this is still pretty hasty i'm quite busy at the moment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 Hmm, the last battle defending orb was against ZAFT, why would he join the side he's trying to get revenge on? Unless you're doing a Char type of thing Looks pretty fine, you could elaborate on some of the things in there such as what happened when he found out about the things his father hid from him; what happened in the meeting with his sister etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted November 1, 2006 Share Posted November 1, 2006 I doubt he would be allowed back to the military if he deserted? Or is it a different military he is trying to join up with? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kai Howe 0 Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 (Sorry i havenèt been on in like a couple of months but i got sidetracked,,) and FYI, its a different military Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 Please do brush up on the bio further. You can take a look in the Character Library for examples of the standard we strive for here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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