Saren 0 Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 (edited) General Full name: Saren LeRoy Nickname: Saren Age: 23 Gender: Male Race: Coordinator Occupation: MS Pilot Birthplace: Sextillits City Citizenship: PLANT Personality: Very calm, but very playful as well. Often times, if he is not fighting in his Zaku, he can be found playing video games in his room or at times reading a book. When in battle, he fights with a calm fury, steadily rising as the battle progress, gathering in strength and power as it goes on. Appearance (guess which one is Saren =P) Height: 5' 9" Weight: 145 lbs Hair Colour and Style: Black hair color, and the hair is short and messy, not laying in any particular fashion. Eye Colour: a dark blue, almost purple in color but not quite. Identifying Marks: None Skin Tone: White Build: Thin and wiry Clothing: When outside of a uniform, he likes to wear very baggy clothing, usually in the colors of black and blue. He hates wearing shorts or long sleeved shirts, so his most common wardrobe consits of short sleeve shirts and long pants, like jeans. Handiness: Right handed Background Mother: Billi LeRoy Father: Ken LeRoy Siblings: None Wife/Girlfriend: None Personal History: "Born" and raised in the PLANTs, Saren lived a normal childhood, shielded from any wars or violence that existed outside the peaceful existence in the PLANTs. However, at the age of 16, his family decided to visit Earth for the very first time. There he faced the first violent prejudice to-wards "his kind" on the surface as his family was murdered before him by a group of extremist EA soldiers. Terrorized beyond action, a group of ORB soldiers stopped the EA soldier from killing him, rescuing him from certain death. Sending him back to the colonies to live with some relatives, he vowed to kill ever last human on Earth, with exception to those in Orb, thanking them everday in his own way for saving him so he could someday attain revenge. However, by this time the war was over and he, without direction in his life or any idea, began to let his grades slip as he fell into depression. So he joined with ZAFT at the age of 20 after wandering through life, in the hopes of one day avenging his parents. He has spent the past 3 years at the academy learning to become the best pilot he can be, hoping to someday become a ZAFT elite. (OK, not the greatest, but the timing of this rpg kinda sucks....) Edited October 29, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saren 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Author Share Posted October 27, 2006 Yo, how about looking at mine so i can finish the history thing since i cant edit it or nothing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonDaimyo 3 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 If you can't edit it, the generally accepted tactic is to make a new thread, finish/alter the bio in the new thread, then delete this thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 You should be able to edit, the edit bug has been fixed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saren 0 Posted October 28, 2006 Author Share Posted October 28, 2006 ok then, will have a bio up sooner or later... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 Good man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saren 0 Posted October 28, 2006 Author Share Posted October 28, 2006 Bio up. take a look and offer suggestions or what not if needed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 You would need to have more details in the background. He can't learn to be an elite pilot. The academy is there to train pilots. You graduate as an elite if your grades are good enough for it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 I think he meant that he trained to be the best as he could Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 Yeah details like that would iron out any ambiguity. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saren 0 Posted October 28, 2006 Author Share Posted October 28, 2006 Ok, bio altered. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad 0 Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 How come he wants to 'exterminate all human life on Earth' when the reason he was able to survive is because of Orb? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saren 0 Posted October 28, 2006 Author Share Posted October 28, 2006 (edited) Well, i could say because they weren't able to save his family, but if you want, I'll change it to say he wants to kill all but those in Orb. *modified* Edited October 28, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad 0 Posted October 28, 2006 Share Posted October 28, 2006 Well, however you change it is up to you. I just felt it was inconsistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saren 0 Posted October 28, 2006 Author Share Posted October 28, 2006 Change done. anything else? I know its not the greatest bio, but i suck at bios when it comes to SEED. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 29, 2006 Share Posted October 29, 2006 It looks fine to me Personality: Very calmn, but very playful as well. Often times, if he is not fighting in his Zaku, he can be found playing video games in his room or at times reading a book. When in battle, he fights with a calmn fury, steadly rising as the battle progress, gathering in strength and power as it goes on. Calm* You'd have to be assigned a ZAKU after you're accepted by the ZAFT leader Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saren 0 Posted October 29, 2006 Author Share Posted October 29, 2006 Works for me. Where do I apply? *goes to fix spelling error* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liubei013 0 Posted October 29, 2006 Share Posted October 29, 2006 Once the profile gets approved/moved to Character Library, you just post your enlistment request in your profile. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonDaimyo 3 Posted October 29, 2006 Share Posted October 29, 2006 I noticed a few more spelling errors in your bio. I would recommend running it through the on-site spell-checker. Sending him back to the colonies to live with some relatives, Who sent him? Maybe change to "Sent" rather than "Sending". I know it's hard to try and extend this stuff, but maybe you could go into what led to his parents being killed and why he sunk into into depression rather than building a new life? Just a thought. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saren 0 Posted October 29, 2006 Author Share Posted October 29, 2006 Not gonna happen unless I have to. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad 0 Posted October 29, 2006 Share Posted October 29, 2006 If you really want to get your profile approved as quickly as possible, I suggest that you seriously consider all the ideas of those who've gotten their profiles already approved. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saren 0 Posted October 29, 2006 Author Share Posted October 29, 2006 Hmph, leaves no mystery for the character's motives for the rpg.... w/e. I'll do it later when I feel like going through the trouble. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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