Alexander Von Freiheit 0 Posted October 18, 2006 Share Posted October 18, 2006 (edited) Full name: Alexander Robertsen Von Freiheit Nickname: Chevalier Age:17 Gender: Male Race:Coordinator Occupation: OS Programmer Birthplace: Kingdom of Scandinavia Citizenship: Kingdom of Scandinavia Personality: He is usually quiet and reflective.He does not like to fight but tries to sort things out peacefully.He is patient with everyone even to those who annoy him. Appearance Height:5'9' Weight:139 lbs Hair Colour and Style: Black,similar to Athrun Zala but shorter Eye Colour: brown Identifying Marks: none Skin Tone: Pale,slightly tanned Build:Mid-built Clothing:white uniform with sword, Handiness: Left-Handed Background Mother: Kathryn Robertsen Father: Eric Von Freiheit Siblings:None Wife/Girlfriend: None for the moment. Personal History: Alex was born in the Kingdom of Scandinavia where he lived with his family in their mansion somewhere near the coast of Scandinavia.His father owned the Farsight Corporation, which provides electronic hardware for both the commercial and military. He grew up in the peaceful environment and he grew where Naturals and Coordinators could live together in peace. His father was actively involve in trying to bring peace between the two races. He followed his father around the various facilities that his fathers owned and he was interested in Mobile Suits and their complex operating systems.At the age of 15 he was sent to study in Stockholm to complete high school. During this time, his father regularly talked with him about a dream that both Coordinators and naturals can live together in peace. Eric Von Freiheit urged Alex to carry on that dream. Alex finished high school and entered Stockholm University, where he studied Mobile Suit technology and OS systems. During his childhood,He learned how to play the piano and he had musical talents.Today, He still plays the Piano and is also playing the flute when he has nothing to do.He loved reading books from his fathers liberary. Alex loved working at his new office right inside his fathers Mobile Suit facility, where there was nothing but him and his computers. Because of his work on the new OS were very good,His father sent him to ORB to work on a project which were being conducted in the Corporation's Mobile Suit production facilities.The project was part of his fathers dream to make Mobile Suits which will someday be used by people willing to protect the peace between Coordinators and Naturals. Alex moved to ORB and stayed in one of the family's mansions. He quickly settled into his work and began to be very active in ensuring that the already fragile peace does not break and another war begins. He began to work to on the project and he hoped that these new Mobile Suits would someday protect the already fragile peace. Meanwhile, his parents communicate with him regularly and he sometimes takes time off to visit them in the Kingdom of Scandinavia. However, that does not happen very often because he is usually very busy on the project. PS. I would Like to apply to join ORB but as a Civilian. Edited November 11, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 Need to expand on your personal history a whole lot more, you covered most of the basic points well enough but it needs elaboration; also try to fill out the rest of the template. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 Do a spell check while you're at it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kct 0 Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 Physical description could do with some improvements. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishian 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Well the bio is on the shortside just elaborate some and you will be fine (elaborate?? wrongspelled? ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander Von Freiheit 0 Posted November 4, 2006 Author Share Posted November 4, 2006 Edited, Hows that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted November 4, 2006 Share Posted November 4, 2006 Hmm... you should not include anything about a secret mobile suit project because there isn't any mention of that in the storyline. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander Von Freiheit 0 Posted November 5, 2006 Author Share Posted November 5, 2006 I have edited it....... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted November 5, 2006 Share Posted November 5, 2006 Alright. It looks better now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 Please make an official request to join a faction and, if it is your intention, the faction's military. You are technically not allowed to RP until you have been accepted into a faction. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander Von Freiheit 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Author Share Posted November 11, 2006 (edited) Erm,so I can't be a civilian......alright then, please tell me how to join a faction....Do I PM the Leader?? Edited November 11, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 You can be a civilian if you want, but you still need to apply to the faction you intend to be a civilian in. Reference: http://www.adventdestiny.com/index.php/topic,451.0.html Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander Von Freiheit 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Author Share Posted November 11, 2006 So where do I apply for ORB Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 Post your request here. I received your PM, but Valiant would like everyone to follow protocol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander Von Freiheit 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Author Share Posted November 11, 2006 Here??? where? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 lol, I apologize for the confusion. To make things clear, you are required to make a post here in your character profile thread that says something along the lines of "I would like to join Orb as a civilian." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander Von Freiheit 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Author Share Posted November 11, 2006 Hows that?? its on the Profile. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 Just post again stating you wish to join Orb. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander Von Freiheit 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Author Share Posted November 11, 2006 I would Like to Join ORB as a Civilian.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 [align=center]Orb Union Bureau of Citizenry Kusanagi City, United Emirates of Orb[/align] This is to certify that Mr. Alexander Von Freiheit has permanent resident status in the United Emirates of Orb. Signed and Noted by: Representative Rad Rider-Kamakura -------------------- Welcome to ORB, Alexander Von Freiheit. Were you aware that your display name doesn't need to be the same as your character's name? You could just use Alex if you want. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander Von Freiheit 0 Posted November 11, 2006 Author Share Posted November 11, 2006 (edited) Thank you Edited November 11, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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