Talas Elco 0 Posted October 20, 2006 Share Posted October 20, 2006 (edited) its rubbish General Full name: Hoji Nokojima Nickname: Hoji Age: 34 Gender: M Race: (Natural or Coordinator) Natural Occupation: Gun for Hire Birthplace: Tokyo Citizenship: Soldier of Fire Personality: Hoji is young and in-experienced, he is a master Martial-Artist and a Brilliant Swords and Marksman, he has seen battle but has not been made to make decisions under pressure, he is quite laid back and friendly, though wary against potential threats Appearance Height: 5"11 Weight: 150 pounds Hair Colour and Style: Black Hair, spike up with gel. Eye Colour: brown Identifying Marks: scar running from right eyebrow to right chin Skin Tone: olive Build: light Clothing: Hoji wears black T-shirt, long sleeved and black trousers, he wears a trademark knee low leather coat and has two holsters for semi-Automatic pistols on his thighs, at his waist, an Ancient Katana can be found which Hoji is a master at wielding. Handiness: (Left-handed, Right-handed or Ambidextrous) Right Handed Background Mother: Sun Nokojima Father: Chao Nokojima Siblings: none Wife/Girlfriend: no-one worth mentioning Personal History: Hoji Grew up in Central Tokyo Where his father taught him the way of the sword, and the warrior, his father and descendants were all samurai but in these new times the way of the warrior had been forgotten, Hoji trained with his father on the mountain peaks that contained the last of the Dojo's that trained even his Grandfathers Grandfather. Here Hoji learned the ways of the ninja and that of the sword, he became a master of both armed and un-armed combat after many years of training. It was after this, when Hoji was 19, that his mother and father were killed by gang bosses when his father had refused to teach him the secrets of the Samurai, this made Hoji almost Mad for revenge, he travelled around japan, learning new combat techniques and became proficient in using most firearms, he never gained any experience in Mobile Suits as his father had not approved of them, he finally tracked down the Gang Leader who killed his family and he killed him. It was from then on Hoji Travelled the world as a gun for hire, he swore to hunt down every man like the gang leader and kill him to relieve his pain, it was then he heard of the soldiers of fire... Edited October 20, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 You need to expand on your paragraphs further, I feel. Somethings you could possibly include are: why no one is worth mentioning as a wife/gf, how he got his scar, etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wilhelm 0 Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 (edited) Also, Soldiers of Fire is an organization, not a nation. Perhaps choose a citizenship, Orb, Earth Alliance, Oceania, Republic of East Asia, and Plant. *Valiant, Aye Edited October 25, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 Earth Alliance isn't exactly a nation It's a faction made up of the nations, Atlantic Federation, Eurasia Federation, Republic of East Asia and the South African Union. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rad 0 Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 I should point out the contradiction between "young" and "age: 34", as well as "inexperienced" and "master martial artist/swordsman/marksman." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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