Kokoru Himura 0 Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 (edited) General Full Name: Kokoru Sanada Himura Nickname: Koru or Kokoru Age: 17 Gender: Male Race: Coordinator Occupation: Mobile Suit Pilot Birthplace: PLANTs Citizenship: PLANTs Personality: Short Tempered, a bit arrogant and tricky when in battle. He's friendly, outgoing and helpful when he's out of combat. He a bit unattentive at some times. Appearance Height: 5"11 Weight: 55 kg Hair color and style: He has a braid at the back of his hair and has blonde hair. Eye Color: Yellow Identifying Marks: None whatsoever Skin Tone: Fair Build: Medium Clothing: ZAFT Uniform (green coat first right?). Handiness: Ambidextrous Background: Father: Cairne Himura Mother: Raine Sanada Siblings: Lea Zorin (married sister) History: Kokoru Himura met many obstacles on his way in life. Some, he overcame and some had to be left forgotten. And one of the obstacles was very tragic. His father was a Natural Mobile Suit Pilot of the Earth Alliance and he inspired Kokoru to be one. His father piloted a Duel Gundam. His mother was a scientist who worked in creating coordinators. When Kokoru was 13, his mother died when she was at a ZAFT ship during a war between ZAFT and the Earth Alliance. The ship was destroyed by a Duel Gundam. Kokoru and others suspect that it was Kokoru's Father, Cairne Himura who destroyed the ship but Kokoru knew how much Cairne loved Raine. During the funeral of Raine, Kokoru's dad never even bothered to come to the funeral. Kokoru decided to join ZAFT to find out who really killed his mom and he wanted to avenge her even it meant shooting down his own father. Edited December 24, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 Check the formatting. Work more on the personality. Add more detail to the background. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaizer 0 Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 As a side note, I just have to ask if you're a Super Robot Wars fan; cause I'm sure that Mai Kobayashi is the name of one of SRX team pilots . Otherwise speaking, I believe that Valiant's suggestions are more than fitting, and should be thought about. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoru Himura 0 Posted December 24, 2006 Author Share Posted December 24, 2006 (edited) Woah. to be honest with you, i never heard of someone named mai kobayashi! Honest! Ok/ Done Edited December 24, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kokoru Himura 0 Posted December 25, 2006 Author Share Posted December 25, 2006 sorry for impatience but winders said it would be ok so BUMP. I edited it already. What do ya think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 The history and personality needs to be expanded on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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