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Takashi Tokojira

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Full name: Takashi Tokojira

Nickname: Raven

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Race: Coordinator

Occupation: ZAFt Pilot

Birthplace: Januarius 4

Citizenship: PLANT

Personality: Normally quiet when not under extreme stress, but in extremley stressful combat situations

Takashi will adapt beserky like traits




Height: 5'10

Weight: 150 pounds

Hair Colour and Style: Raven black, and his hair will normally be dishelved

Eye Colour: Brown

Identifying Marks: Cross shaped scar on left cheek, and will always have messy hair

Skin Tone: Cacasiun

Build: average

Clothing: Black leather jacket, sand blasted blue jeans, black t-shirt under jacket, and combat boots

Handiness: Right-handed




Mother: Jean Tokojira

Father: deceased

Siblings: none

Wife/Girlfriend: none


Personal History: Takashi grew up just like any other kid with a standard school education, but around age 15 he developed an obsession with  Ravens. His friends noticed this, and gave him the nickname "Raven". Takashi took small note of this, and just continued with his education. After graduating high school,  he went into the Zaft armed forces, hoping to be a mobile suit pilot. He suceeded with basic training, and is waiting to be assigned a mobile suit.

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Take your time.  Or better yet, develop and put down whatever you got.  Feedback from us could help you construct your bio into a more 'complete' form.


A quick point:

"Personality: Normally quiet but in extremely stressful situations Subzero will (or may?) act berzerk."


You could expand on your Personality a little more. (Like answering or tying with your history as to why he's quiet/berzerk in such situations, etc.)

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