Subzero Uchiha 0 Posted January 5, 2007 Share Posted January 5, 2007 (edited) General Full name: Takashi Tokojira Nickname: Raven Age: 23 Gender: Male Race: Coordinator Occupation: ZAFt Pilot Birthplace: Januarius 4 Citizenship: PLANT Personality: Normally quiet when not under extreme stress, but in extremley stressful combat situations Takashi will adapt beserky like traits Appearance Height: 5'10 Weight: 150 pounds Hair Colour and Style: Raven black, and his hair will normally be dishelved Eye Colour: Brown Identifying Marks: Cross shaped scar on left cheek, and will always have messy hair Skin Tone: Cacasiun Build: average Clothing: Black leather jacket, sand blasted blue jeans, black t-shirt under jacket, and combat boots Handiness: Right-handed Background Mother: Jean Tokojira Father: deceased Siblings: none Wife/Girlfriend: none Personal History: Takashi grew up just like any other kid with a standard school education, but around age 15 he developed an obsession with Ravens. His friends noticed this, and gave him the nickname "Raven". Takashi took small note of this, and just continued with his education. After graduating high school, he went into the Zaft armed forces, hoping to be a mobile suit pilot. He suceeded with basic training, and is waiting to be assigned a mobile suit. Edited January 7, 2007 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evo_Sieg 0 Posted January 5, 2007 Share Posted January 5, 2007 Your character's personal history is quite short, please refer to characters in the character library for some examples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Subzero Uchiha 0 Posted January 5, 2007 Author Share Posted January 5, 2007 man... I knew that was going to come back, and bite me in the @$$. It's a work in progress, and I'm working on it. It takes me a while to think of bio because brain clutter. I'll fix it when I can think of a good bio. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liubei013 0 Posted January 6, 2007 Share Posted January 6, 2007 Take your time. Or better yet, develop and put down whatever you got. Feedback from us could help you construct your bio into a more 'complete' form. A quick point: "Personality: Normally quiet but in extremely stressful situations Subzero will (or may?) act berzerk." You could expand on your Personality a little more. (Like answering or tying with your history as to why he's quiet/berzerk in such situations, etc.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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