Re: Sion Kaizen

[Kai 0]

General

 

Full Name: Sion Kaizen

Nickname: Kai

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Race: Coordinator

Occupation: Collage Student

Birth Place: ORB

Citizenship: ORB Nation

Personality:

Sion Kaizen can be calm and collected in panicky situations, but to a fault he has a short temper which can lead him to bad decisions and place him in bad situations. He stands strongly for justice, but will have little concern for his enemies in battle. Highly defensive about his emotions, deep down he is quite emotional.

 

Appearance

 

Height: 170 cm

Weight: 155lb

Hair Colour And Style: Black hair with blond  streaks.

Eye Colour: Hazel

Identifying marks: A gruesome scar running from his left shoulder down to his left hand.

Skin Tone: Tanned

Build: Quite muscular but not apparent by first glance.

Clothing: Black leather jacket with a white vest underneath. Also wearing black jeans and black boots with white stripes running down the sides of them.

Handiness: Ambidextrous

 

Background

 

Mother: N/A

Father: N/A

Siblings: N/A

Wife/Girlfriend: N/A

 

Personal History:

 

Sion Kaizen had an unusual childhood which left him emotionally scarred and mentally isolated from everyone around him. He was first born in December city and raised to the age of five. He was left and found outside a retired soldiers house whose name was Eric, who lived a life of isolation and loneliness.

 

At this age he secretly began to study how guns and the such worked. One specific weapon had interested him to an extent where he was near obsession. He read up on mobile suits, and was fascinated by the destructive power which they could cause. Him and Eric eventually moved to ORB where Eric thought he could have a peaceful and meaningful upbringing. He attended school and was extremely smart for his age, although his teachers and friends found his work disturbing.

 

When he had finished his work in class, he would design new types of mobile suits and new weapons which they could equip. Through this he was picked on and feared by the other kids. After years of being tormented, he was brutally beaten in an alley and was in a coma for 5 months.

 

Around this time he was 15 and had nearly given up on life until he met a girl who didn't find him weird. She to was a coordinator and was also left out by the other kids. When school finished they were close friends and were at the age of 16. On his 17th birthday she moved to unknown wherebouts and was left alone again. Eric had never helped him out with bullying, whenever he asked him for help, he just simply hit Sion and scolded him for being weak.

 

Through the next two years he was again bullied and beaten down, until he reached the point of retaliation and fought three boys until they were severely damaged and hospitalized for 2 months. One was equipped with a knife, and brutally gashed his left arm. After experiencing this, he ran away from home, hoping to find somewhere safe. Now at the age of 19, he lives his life on the streets, searching for a place of belonging.

[Kaizer 0]

*pokes the other kai, wondering who stole my name* 

 

Heh, welcome to the site, always nice to see another Kai .

 

Perhaps you can give a better definition of Sion's version of justice, as plenty of people have their own views of what justice is.  Just how does he define good and evil people?

 

Please give a bit more info on his parents if possible, be they foster parents or birth parents.  Names and whether or not they are known to be dead or alive is usually enough to satisfy.  Everyone comes from somewhere, so even if the parents don't play a role in the person's life, its nice to know just who sired Sion and such.

 

Your grammar needs a bit of work here and there, as you make it sound more like the people around Sion are mobile suits (people are not severely damaged, they are severely injured).  Just use the spell checker provided by the site, and maybe check a dictionary for some better words to fit what you want to say.

 

I'm sure people would also like to know why Sion is interested in guns and mobile weapons to such a degree.  Does it have anything to do with his past?  Or is he just naturally bloodthirsty?