lunarin 0 Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 Full name: Lunarin Rukia Mizuki Nickname: Luna Age: 15 Gender: Female Race: Natural Occupation: Celebrity Singer Birthplace: Orb Citizenship: Orb Personality: Patient, kind, caring and sometimes serious Appearance Height: 5" 3 Weight: 100 lb Hair Colour and Style: Layered jet black hair down to the elbows Eye Colour: *changes according to mood* Identifying Marks: A scar on her neck Skin Tone: Regular flawless skin tone Build: Regular girls' build but not too tough Clothing: Blue halter with navy blue sheer and a mini skirt Handiness: Right handed Background Mother: Ayumi Mizuki (adopted) Inori Hayate (birth) Father: Toshiki Mizuki (adopted) Haruhi Hayate (birth) Siblings: None Boyfriend: Athrun Zala Personal History: Lunarin was once attacked from an unknown force. She was saved by Athrun Zala and was taken to the ZAFT ship. She is now the CIC of the ship. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 Please note that canon characters are not allowed. Read the rules and guides before you post. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kct 0 Posted May 28, 2007 Share Posted May 28, 2007 Additional things to note out: 1. Occupation, citizenship, and history (I cut out the part about canon characters, they're not allowed here) seems to be clashing with each other. 2. Define eye colour that *changes according to mood*, because that would be contradictory to the Natural blood that your character is having. 3. I noticed that you have 2 different pairs of parents for the character. Mind to elaborate more on that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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