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Lunarin Rukia Mizuki


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Full name: Lunarin Rukia Mizuki

Nickname: Luna

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Race: Natural

Occupation: Celebrity Singer

Birthplace: Orb

Citizenship: Orb

Personality: Patient, kind, caring and sometimes serious




Height: 5" 3

Weight: 100 lb

Hair Colour and Style: Layered jet black hair down to the elbows

Eye Colour: *changes according to mood*

Identifying Marks: A scar on her neck

Skin Tone: Regular flawless skin tone

Build: Regular girls' build but not too tough

Clothing: Blue halter with navy blue sheer and a mini skirt

Handiness: Right handed




Mother: Ayumi Mizuki (adopted) Inori Hayate (birth)

Father: Toshiki Mizuki (adopted) Haruhi Hayate (birth)

Siblings: None

Boyfriend: Athrun Zala


Personal History: Lunarin was once attacked from an unknown force. She was saved by Athrun Zala and was taken to the ZAFT ship. She is now the CIC of the ship.

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Additional things to note out:


1. Occupation, citizenship, and history (I cut out the part about canon characters, they're not allowed here) seems to be clashing with each other.


2. Define eye colour that *changes according to mood*, because that would be contradictory to the Natural blood that your character is having.


3. I noticed that you have 2 different pairs of parents for the character. Mind to elaborate more on that?

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