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Full name: Kokoru Himura

Nickname: Koru or Kou. His close friends call him Ryou.

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Race: (Natural or Coordinator) Coordinator

Occupation: MS Pilot

Birthplace: PLANTs

Citizenship: PLANTs (Aprilius City)

Personality: Cocky and a bit arrogant. Thinks he can do things by himself. He likes to be alone and only shows his arrogance when he is in missions. Though he is, he knows how to follow orders properly. But sometimes, he goes against them when the enemy angers him so much.




Height: 5 ft, 10 inch

Weight: 56 kg

Hair Colour and Style: Long gray hair reaching to his upper neck and it is a bit bushy.

Eye Colour: Maroon

Identifying Marks: None

Skin Tone: Fair

Build: Normal

Clothing: ZAFT uniform

Handiness: (Left-handed, Right-handed or Ambidextrous) Ambidextrous




Mother: Nanami Misaki (Deceased, Natural)

Father: Kojirou Himura (Separated, Coordinator)

Siblings: Chigusa Kusaka (Younger Sister, Married, Coordinator, Separated), Masato Himura (Older Brother, Deceased)



Personal History:

History of Kokoru Himura:

Kokoru was born to a rich family in the PLANTs. His mother, Nanami was a doctor that worked on the lives of soldiers in the ZAFT army. His father, Kojirou Himura works as a businessman in the PLANTs. Chigusa works as a fashion model with her husband being her manager. Masato became an actor and earned millions. Kokoru was just a college student in his second year. His father and mother told him to take up medicine because he was going to become a doctor like his mother. But the problem is, Kokoru's parents would decide his future. His job, his wealth, and other things. Kokoru really wanted to be an ace mobile suit pilot, flying around the sky serving the military for the good of the nation.


His parents didn't want that to be his occupation because he will just be a dog of the military. His brother suggested that Kokoru will become an actor just like him. He refused because everyone knew that he wasnt good onstage. His sister gave him a choice which was  to help her design new clothes for some fashion shows. He once again had to decline because he didn't like the idea. And those things just made him dislike his family despite the wealth and fame. He also felt as if his family members were selfish and only wanted him for their own needs.


Then one day, Kokoru came home for his family reunion. They had it at a 5-Star hotel that belonged to his father. But this family reunion also had family members from the Misaki side. They were waiting for the two fathers of the powerful clans, Masayuki and Hotaru, to arrive. An hour has passed and there is still no sign of the two. Later on, A bellboy came inside and told Kokoru to go to the room of Hotaru. But before the two could go out of the room, All the men from the Misaki drew their guns and pointed them at the two. They wouldn't let them go. The Himuras also drew their guns and aimed at Kokoru. It seemed that the Misakis and Himuras made a deal. They would first finish off the Himura's children and then a gunfight between the two families so that they wont know what happened. They needed only one family in their area at that section of the city. The bellboy also drew his gun and decided to buy Kokoru some time. He told him that this family reunion will also be Kokoru's wake and funeral. He revealed himself as his older brother, Masato. Masato handed a gun to Kokoru and told him to go ahead upstairs. Kokoru ran as fast as he could only to hear the gunshot that killed Masato. Kokoru managed to get to the 8th floor where the room of his grand father was at. He saw two dead bodies on the ground. One belonged to Masayuki and the other belonged to his bodyguard. He also saw that the window was opened. His grandfather got away. Kokoru returned to the party to tell everyone the bad news. But found over a hundred bloody dead bodies on the ground. But the bodies of Chigusa and his father were not there.


This event changed Kou's life greatly. He looked at himself as a dull and absent-minded person. He also made himself think that if he asked for help, they would just backstab them and turn their backs on him. He decided to live a life of soltitude away from people. And if he ever needed help, he would handle things by himself.


A few years later, he was wandering around the remains of the demolished hotel of his father, Reminiscing about what happened in his life. How unfair his life was before, the end of the Misaki-Himura companionship. He was seen my two people wearing ZAFT uniforms. One of the soldiers noticed that he was the son of the great ZAFT doctor, Nanami Misaki. He asked Kokoru where was his family. He replied that they died. Then the two remembered what was in the news: "Mayhem in Hotel Himura". They told Kokoru to come with them to their flagship.


The captain welcomed Kokoru to the flagship and asked him about his family. He said that he was homeless and lived by himself under an overpass. The captain said that she didn't know what to do with him. Then an official of the PLANTs entered the bridge and asked him about Masayuki Himura. He told him that he died. The official pointed out that Masayuki was an ace Mobile Suit Pilot of ZAFT. The captain and Kokoru were astonished. The captain then said that Kokoru is to join ZAFT under her command. Kokoru appreciated the recruitment but said that he stopped trusting people. She told him that the military is no place for soldiers to betray their fellowmen. They were to be punished if they ever did. Kokoru was a bit convinced. He joined ZAFT but still had some doubts in his mind.

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Please do not bump when your thread unnecessarily. If you wish to RP here, you are expected to be more patient.


The personality need to be worked on. Some sentences are fragmented. What do you mean by "frenzy"? It is too vague. The same goes for "a bit power hungry". What do you mean by a bit? Perhaps you can give an example to give a clearer picture.


"To sum it all up, just get Haseo from .hack//G.U.'s head and attach it to a ZAFT uniform." This is pure laziness or perhaps it is a measure of your RPing abilities? This is no different from using a picture to describe the character. The lack of originality can be overlooked. However, the lack of effort to describe the character gives the impression that you are not serious about this RP. Serious RPers would go into details to describe their character so that other players can actually visualize the character's appearance vividly.


The history is too short. What is the motive of the massacre? Were the perpetrators arrested? How did this shape him as a person and changed his life?

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We are, but not that often. It also makes your profile quite messy to look at, which is a turn-off to people who will take a look to approve your profile.


Perhaps a suggestion is to PM a certain person who has responded to your profile and ask him for help. Perhaps there is a slump in thread activity right now, please be patient.

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I believe I mentioned this in my previous post.  :(" title="Angry" />


Please do not bump when your thread unnecessarily. If you wish to RP here, you are expected to be more patient.


His parents didn't want that to be his occupation because he will just be a dog of the military. His brother told him to become an actor just like him. He said no because everyone knew that he wasnt good onstage. His sister told him to help her design new clothes for some fashion shows. He said no because he didn't like the idea.


These could be better phrased rather than the repeated use of "said" and "told".

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  • 3 weeks later...


PLANT Supreme Council, National Defense headquarters,

Aprilius One branch[/align]


As of this month of CE85, Kokoru Himura is accepted into the Zodiac Alliance of Freedom Treaty, under the direct supervision and guidance of the Supreme Council of the officers appointed over you.


You and many young people your age will be the next generation allowing Coordinators to live free from persecution and discrimination. We hand the future of Plant into your hands, hold your head high, and don’t let that inner light falter.



Commander Delfina Schneider,

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