Strike_Freedom 0 Posted March 1, 2007 Share Posted March 1, 2007 size=12pt]General[/size] Full name: Lucas P. Ruffeth Nickname: Lucas Age: 16 Gender: male Race: 2nd generation coordinator(parents are coordinators) Occupation: Student at the Institute of Social Sciences(ISS) in October City Birthplace: Feb. 13 C.E. 70, one day before the Bloody Valentine tragedy Citizenship: Plants Personality: Calm,tranquil and goodhearted Appearance Height: 5'6 Weight: 135 lbs Hair Colour and Style: long straight blue hair, up to his shoulders Eye Colour: green Identifying Marks: none Skin Tone: light pale Build: nice shoulders, average build Clothing: the ISS male uniform, black long-sleeved turtleneck trenchcoats, (like the ones worn by ZAFT military officials, only black) Handiness: right-handed Background Mother: Edna Patil Father: Sir Lucas Ruffeth (Sir is not a title, it's part of his first name) Siblings: - Wife/Girlfriend: - Personal History: Lucas is born to an elite family.He is close to his family and his other relatives and he never forgets to keep in touch with them.The Ruffeths has a great history of political success back at the Philippines, and this gives him a lot of pressure not by his parents ,instead brought upon by his ambition to gain international political success someday. (Please tell me if there's something wrong with my character. Thanks!) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zgmf x20a infinite 0 Posted March 1, 2007 Share Posted March 1, 2007 Uhhh well i say you need to make some changes but thats not for me to decide its for the AD team, MODs admins tho...id say you need more background info. admins probably say the same Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strike_Freedom 0 Posted March 2, 2007 Author Share Posted March 2, 2007 I made the background info simple because I'm thinking of leaving his emotional growth in the game. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wilhelm 0 Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 Hrm your history is too short, please elaborate more on why the Ruffeths became so powerful. Add in some background information, IE experiences through various age groups, Childhood, adolescence, and adulthood. If you take a look at the characters in the approved library,you can get several good examples on character applications. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kct 0 Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 You have mentioned that he is a student at the Institute of Social Sciences. Basically, you can touch on stuff, like what he does there, the people he met, and his lifestyle at the institute. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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