XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted October 11, 2006 Share Posted October 11, 2006 (edited) General Full name: James Zaiku Nickname: Jamie Age: 21 Gender:Male Race: Coordinator Occupation: Mobile suit Pilot Birthplace: December City Citizenship: ZAFT Personality: James is a very like able guy and has a very outgoing personality. He enjoys to make people laugh and also be there for people to lean on. But at times he can get immature or hot headed. He isn't the big war hero, or cool guy. But when it comes to making friends he has no problem. Appearance Height: 6'2'' Weight: 156 lbs. Hair Colour and Style: Brown hair. Cut short in the back and long in the front and on top. Eye Colour: Red Identifying Marks: None Skin Tone: Cocasion but tan Build: Very toned Clothing: Black shoes with tight blue jeans. Studded belt with a red T- shirt. Black Hoodie over the shirt. Handiness: Right handed Background Mother: Dead Father: James Zaiku SR. Siblings: Dylan Zaiku Wife/Girlfriend: None Personal History: James was the first son to James and Heidi Zaiku. They were both Coordinators who lived in December City. James Zaiku Sr. was a business man. He sold weapons and other various goods. There were plenty of people on the Earth that needed supplies and he was the man to give it to them. His father loved the war, it made his business boom. To him though the army and soldiers fighting in this war were stupid. To him they were only mindless pawns which helped him make money. As for his mother, one would only imagine how she ended up with a guy like James Zaiku. Heidi came from a rich family and was a very kind hearted person. She was against the war and thought the violence should stop. She even wanted her second son, Dylan to be a natural. But James stepped in and ended that idea. From a young age James Zaiku Jr. was well educated. Coming from a rich family also helped very much. Going to the best schools for mathematics, astronomy, aviation, literature, and other topics. James was never the top of his class, but he was average. Learning to fly small ships and other crafts James became a exceptional pilot as well. James's brother Dylan was 2 years younger then him. He was a shy person and didn't have alot of friends. But when he was around James he was a completely different person. He laughed and had fun. But the relationship between Dylan and his father was very bad. Dylan just saw his father as a evil man. When James turned 17 he desided to enlist and help the ZAFT military any way he could. Even if he didnt get to fight he could see the galaxy and travel around. When his father heard about this he laughed and asked why his son would waste his life. James just ignored his father and tried to enlist. But in that same year James's mother died from a heart attack. This put a very large rip in the family. James was now trying to take care of his depressed father and young brother. This lasted for about a year until Dylan and James Sr. got in a fight. This resulted in Dylan running away. He snook on to the first shuttle to the ORB Union. That was a place built on peace, Dylan saw this fitting. With his brother gone James had no desire to stick around at his home. To many bad memories. He sent in his application for ZAFT and only waited for the answer. Edited November 27, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 25, 2006 Share Posted October 25, 2006 Your character would have been two if he experianced the horrors of war. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Author Share Posted October 26, 2006 (edited) O yea I just looked at the update that valiant made. I will change the background a bit. And I think I would be 3. Edited October 26, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 I personally think that most children would be too young, aka not aware enough to experiance the horrors. I think a nice 5 would be fine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 I agree with Wind on that. 3 would be too young. Please do try the spellcheck function and do you happen to be copying and pasting from a text editor? There are weird spaces that mess up the formatting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Author Share Posted October 27, 2006 Yea the spaces are from my Microsoft word. And 5 does sound good. Ill change it in the background. Before I do are there any other things I should change? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wilhelm 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 I think that is all he wants for you to change. Other than that, everything seems okay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Try to do a spell check while you're at it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted November 23, 2006 Author Share Posted November 23, 2006 (edited) Full name: James Zaiku Nickname: Jamie Age: 21 Gender: [/bMale] Race: Coordinator Occupation: Mobile suit Pilot Birthplace: December City Citizenship: ZAFT Personality: James is a very like able guy and has a very outgoing personality. He enjoys to make people laugh and also be there for people to lean on. But at times he can get immature or hot headed. He isn't the big war hero, or cool guy. But when it comes to making friends he has no problem. Appearance Height: 6'2'' Weight: 156 lbs. Hair Colour and Style: Brown hair. Cut short in the back and long in the front and on top. Eye Colour: Red Identifying Marks: None Skin Tone: Cocasion but tan Build: Very toned Clothing: Black shoes with tight blue jeans. Studded belt with a red T- shirt. Black Hoodie over the shirt. Handiness: Right handed Background Mother: Dead Father: James Zaiku SR. Siblings: Dylan Zaiku Wife/Girlfriend: None Personal History: James was the first son to James and Heidi Zaiku. They were both Coordinators who lived in December City. James Zaiku Sr. was a business man. He sold weapons and other various goods. There were plenty of people on the Earth that needed supplies and he was the man to give it to them. His father loved the war, it made his business boom. To him though the army and soldiers fighting in this war were stupid. To him they were only mindless pawns which helped him make money. As for his mother, one would only imagine how she ended up with a guy like James Zaiku. Heidi came from a rich family and was a very kind hearted person. She was against the war and thought the violence should stop. She even wanted her second son, Dylan to be a natural. But James stepped in and ended that idea. From a young age James Zaiku Jr. was well educated. Coming from a rich family also helped very much. Going to the best schools for mathematics, astronomy, aviation, literature, and other topics. James was never the top of his class, but he was average. Learning to fly small ships and other crafts James became a exceptional pilot as well. James's brother Dylan was 2 years younger then him. He was a shy person and didn't have alot of friends. But when he was around James he was a completely different person. He laughed and had fun. But the relationship between Dylan and his father was very bad. Dylan just saw his father as a evil man. When James turned 17 he realized the horrors of war and decided to help out and end the war. When his father heard about this he laughed and asked why his son would waste his life. James just ignored his father and tried to enlist. But in that same year James's mother died from a heart attack. This put a very large rip in the family. James was now trying to take care of his depressed father and young brother. This lasted for about a year until Dylan and James Sr. got in a fight. This resulted in Dylan running away. He snook on to the first shuttle to the ORB Union. With his brother gone James had no desire to stick around at his home. To many bad memories. He sent in his application for ZAFT and only waited for the outsome. Edited November 23, 2006 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted November 23, 2006 Share Posted November 23, 2006 Please edit your first post instead of posting the whole profile again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted November 24, 2006 Author Share Posted November 24, 2006 Done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azaru Vesta 0 Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 To keep legibility please keep the bold tags into labels like the template located here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 Alright, sorry about that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted November 27, 2006 Share Posted November 27, 2006 How could he realize the horrors of war at 17? There was no war in CE 81. To experience the war at 17 he would have to be 29 now. Also you could try working on your spelling, try copy and pasting your profile into word and push F7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted November 27, 2006 Author Share Posted November 27, 2006 Wasnt there war in CE 70-75? So if he was atleast 5 and saw the war he would be atleast 15 by now. And isnt the game taking place in CE 85? I could be wrong, you most likly know more then me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liubei013 0 Posted November 27, 2006 Share Posted November 27, 2006 "When James turned 17 he realized the horrors of war and decided to help out and end the war." Winders is correct. The only recent 'war' was the 2nd Valentine War which took place in CE 73 (Treaty signing at 74), hence his point about age discrepancy. (12 year difference between the 2nd War and 'now.' ) Perhaps it was the way you phrased the sentence, but if we take your current age into account, then there was no war when he was 17. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted November 28, 2006 Author Share Posted November 28, 2006 Alright I fixed the age problem. I used the spell check and re read on this website. My PC dosnt have microsoft Word. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted November 29, 2006 Share Posted November 29, 2006 Ok, your profile is looking good now; you meet my minimum requirements Approved, please post which faction you wish to apply to join Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Author Share Posted November 30, 2006 I want to join ZAFT. I contacted someone about it, I dont remeber the name off hand now. Should I wait for you to say something about me in a faction? Or should I do it myself, just mail the proper person? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winders 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Share Posted November 30, 2006 You post here ASKING to join the faction, you don't PM the respective faction leader (or their PM box would be flooded!) You can add ZAFT info into your bio without being in a faction, but you have to get it re-checked Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted December 1, 2006 Author Share Posted December 1, 2006 Alright, so basicly I wait... Im sorry I am rather new to this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxBRICKSTERxX 0 Posted December 4, 2006 Author Share Posted December 4, 2006 I apologize for double posting, a edit would not do anything. But I am applying for ZAFT. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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