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Zeru Ayanami


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The spelling is pretty much correct, depending on an American, or British format. I kinda mix both up, but IMO, they're correct. I ran it through the spell check, and most of them are wrong just because they're British. (Eg colour instead of color, socialise instead of socialize). In Singapore, we all learn British standard English. Valiant, or any Singaporean player here can account for that.

 

Otherwise, I did fix up the real typos (serpant instead of serpent)

 

About the OS mention, I said I was one of the few pilots in the EA who programmed an OS on my own, not using the one Kira programmed. I just had to write it in a long-winded way since I was trying to avoid mentioning names. But eh, I think I know what you mean. I tweaked it, so point me out if I'm wrong.

 

And I speedily edited my profile, so I left out my citizenship as Orb. Well, its changed now. Anything else?

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If all you people are using British spelling and such, I'm probably gonna have to go learn some of it, lest I keep making errors like that. Maybe find a Word modification that takes into account at least. >_>

 

At any rate, I'm in a bit of a rush ATM, but everything looks fine to me. You may consider yourself officially accepted as a Serpent Tail member with the rank Recruit Pilot. I'll make all nice and fancy here in a bit.

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[align=center]Serpent Tail[/align]

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Zeru Ayanami, your application to join the Serpent Tail mercenary forces has been accepted. You will join with the rank of Recruit Pilot. The Serpent Tail is an old and well-known mercenary group which prides itself on its long record of excellent service to our clients. As a member of the Serpent Tail, you will be expected to contribute toward continuing this tradition.

 

Please report to the Serpent Tail Central Command at Shesha Colony as soon as possible. When you arrive, you will be assigned to a Serpent Tail team for initial training and initiation.

 

Good luck and fair sailings to you.

 

~Michael Sebastian Carlini

Serpent Tail Commander

Shesha Command

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