Sylia Rose 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 (edited) Sylia Rose (Keri) Player name: Sylia Rose Character number: 1 Faction: EA General Full name: Sylia Rose Nickname: N/A Age: 23 Gender: Female Race: Natural Occupation: Student, currently attending Captain's school Birthplace: Berlin, Germany Citizenship: Atlantic Federation Personality: Sylia is a very dedicated and focused person. She gives herself 110% to any given task be it professional or personal, and does what is needed to complete her goal. Although this does not make her uncaring and unfeeling towards other people in fact she values all human life including the enemy. In general she is approachable and reasonable but carries herself with an air of independence that some people find off putting. She views everyone as equal and treats them as such. Appearance http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b290/window-licker/SeigandSylia.jpg[/img] Im the one on the Right! Height: 5 feet 8 inches Weight: Never you mind!! Hair Colour and Style: Long brown hair down to the base of her spine, with a heavy fringe Eye Colour: Green Identifying Marks: None Skin Tone: Caucasian Build: Slim and athletic (through a strict diet and regular excercise) Clothing: Casual wear when not on duty Handiness: Right-handed Background Mother: Louisa Rose Father: Rear Admiral Norman Rose Siblings: Tyr and Marla Rose (younger sisters to Sylia, twins to each other) Wife/Girlfriend: not at the moment Personal History: Sylia was born into an military familly, as her father was very much an officer on his way up, taking promotions were he could get them never usual at the same station. Unfortunatly this lead to Sylia being moved around constantly, never getting a chance to make friends or establish any sort of roots. Her mother helped this by being a constant source of encouragement and reassurance. But even though she was supported there was a lonliness that wouldnt fade. While her father was a loving man and although dedicated to his career he always took his daughter wherever he could, she loved every aspect of her fathers work and became the darling of many space crews. Through this she learned one phrase from her father that has stuck with her "Loyalty is your greatest asset, but is it not freely given and must be earned". It was with this thought that as soon as she was old enough Sylia enrolled in officers school, which was located on the same campus as the test centre in New Edwards, New York. At this time Sylia's looks had fully developed but she found the constant attention from her male colleges annoying and was even worse were the wolf whistles from the "Pilot jocks" attached to the test centre. However there was one pilot who through shear persistance got through to her, no matter how many times she told him to leave her alone, the more persitant he became. His name was Gabriel Faust and after a whirlwind romance they were married shortly before her final year at school; though things were far from idylic. He was constantly accused of going on breaks just to see his wife, while she was laughed at by her fellow officers for consorting with a lowly MA pilot. the problems continued out of work Gabriel was completly unorganised and random while she was methodical and organised argument after argument insued. Although they loved each other dearly on the most basic level the strain was just too much. They divorced later that year and havent seen each other since. With Gaberiel gone and the prejudice of a captain/pilot romance taken with it, Sylia was able to concentrate on her studies once more, and a significant rise in her scores were noticed by her professors; so much so that they began to suspect that she had been cheating somehow. Once any thoughts of cheating were quelshed, Sylia ended up scoring in the top 20 of her class, and rumors spread that she would be assigned to a ship the moment her graduation was official; and the fact that the rumors have yet to be proven true or false only adds to their mystique. Edited September 6, 2007 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wilhelm 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Pretty good read, good profile.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishian 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 damnit my char is to young for her Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liubei013 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 Lol @ Weight. :X As Wilhelm said, a good profile. Paragraph 3: Colleges --> Colleagues (Spell Check wouldn't have caught that.) The only issue I see is the lack of detail regarding your character's father's involvement in the war. (Sylia would be 9 during the first war and 11 during the second.) I mentioned this to see if there was some, if any, effect the war had on her father, and thus, herself. (Or that Sylia's father was one of those rear-line officers, iono.) But it's not THAT significant of an issue, just a little thing that bothered me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylia Rose 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Author Share Posted October 26, 2006 Thanks for the comments ill fix the spelling. And no offense but if its not a significant issue and your name isnt in green blue or red why bring it up? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liubei013 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 No offense taken. I did note that it's probably not a significant issue. It was a hit or miss, and I missed apparently. @lack of color: I quote from Valiant's recent Update announcement. 2) Your character's profile will be reviewed by the staff and all other members are allowed to provide feedback which you can use to help improve on the character. (From http://www.adventdestiny.com/index.php/topic,326.new.html) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylia Rose 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Author Share Posted October 26, 2006 No need to quote, sorry I shouldnt have been snippy ive been waiting for food which is now here Im not bothered really honestly its cool. But im just not sure on opening up characters to being judged by the general populace. It would kind of like having your homework handed round before its handed in. Sure youll get points and itll be better but its somewhat embarassing. Anyway I will eat now and keep snippy lady at bay. Sorry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liubei013 0 Posted October 26, 2006 Share Posted October 26, 2006 As mentioned, no offense taken. And yes, I do get 'cranky' on occasion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akiseki Snow 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Great profile, looks like your character will be fun to interact with. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Good work, Keri. Well I thought of nit picking on all the spelling errors but I'm no language teacher to bleh As long as people can understand what you mean I'm fine. But of course, not too many errors or I'll go crazy Moving this... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylia Rose 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Author Share Posted October 27, 2006 Requesting Permission to join the EA pweeze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaizer 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 Captain Sylia Rose, fresh from Officer's school in New Edwards, Accepted! Welcome to the EA, you'll get your shiny ship in the mail in 2-3 weeks time . Also, all EA members will be able to see the EA forums sometime today (once I get through with mid-terms). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylia Rose 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Author Share Posted October 27, 2006 Also could you make sure my member title changes this time!! lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valiant 96 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 He can make changes but whether it shows up depends on whether I can fix the bug with the member title. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ishian 0 Posted October 27, 2006 Share Posted October 27, 2006 well you could just change your personal text to EA Captain or whatever your rank in the EA will be. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaizer 0 Posted September 5, 2007 Share Posted September 5, 2007 You'll have to update the profile before I can move it Keri (rules are rules ). Its just a matter of adding a top section to the post to denote which character this is (in the case that you end up getting multiple characters), and to reiterate which faction you want to join (Just take a look at the new template, its not a big change ). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylia Rose 0 Posted September 6, 2007 Author Share Posted September 6, 2007 Updated Nick hun you get on messenger more! lol rerequesting permission to rejoin EA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaizer 0 Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 Sorry for the delay (blames school, and my own procrastination <_<) Sylia Rose accepted, welcome back Captain Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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