Darkness 0 Posted August 28, 2007 Share Posted August 28, 2007 (edited) Seeing as I've started to write a little more often then I use to, I figured I might as well give everyone a chance to read my none-AD pieces. Comments and criticisms are loved - they're the only way I can improve! Feature Works Soaring (Poem) Dark Abyss (Poem) Tears (Prose) The Old One (Poetry) Soluna Chronicles A plot idea that won't leave me alone, and so deserves it's own space. 1. Introduction (Prose/Writing Challenge Entry) 2. Memories (Prose/Writing Challenge Entry) Websites Darkness' Deviantart Darkness' Fanfiction Edited September 29, 2007 by Guest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3rdeyeblind 0 Posted August 28, 2007 Share Posted August 28, 2007 non-AD pieces???? whoah!!!! I give you my fave icon as a compliment....... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkness 0 Posted August 28, 2007 Author Share Posted August 28, 2007 None-AD = Anything that isn't related to this site. Just figured I should clear that up. I'm glad you like my works, now if only I could keep my ideas going for longer then a page or two Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkness 0 Posted September 27, 2007 Author Share Posted September 27, 2007 I know I shouldn't double post, but I have no idea how else to point out that I've updated. Added a new section, and new entry. Hope you all enjoy, and please tell me what you think! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fireminerva 0 Posted September 27, 2007 Share Posted September 27, 2007 I haven't managed to read through the two prose but I did get through the poems. Very interesting. Brings a decent amount of questions to mind but I'm probably in no position to ask. Oh well, still some interesting work. All this kinda brings back some memories of what I wrote in high school, though I must admit my own work was a little on the depressing side of things. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkness 0 Posted September 27, 2007 Author Share Posted September 27, 2007 I'm glad you like what I've written fireminerva . You're quite welcome to ask any questions you do have - I'm not really a secretive person - but if you're worried that the questions you have are too personal for public viewing, I don't mind a pm about it. My more depressing works are never published. I figure there's enough of that around already, and it's rarely worth reading anyway... At least my really depressing stuff isn't. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhoenixForce 0 Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 I guess you could say I am a bit of a non AD writer myself.Overall your workings are good except I would like to see you increase the length of your chronicle chapters as they do seem to be a little short but other than that everything seems fine.Oh and I think I saw a spelling error in one of your chronicles, I think its the introduction however I may have only imagined it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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